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Albert and Jarvis part 71 — 3 Comments

  1. You have a gift for dialogue, Keith. It is something I struggle with. I put too much narrative in my stories. I like the way you handled this chapter.

    • You’re very kind, Kate. I was thinking that I often use too much dialogue at the expense of narrative/scene-setting/descriptive content.

      • Good dialogue brings a reader into a story immediately. I just purchased a book on how to write dialogue effectively. I think you do a fine job with dialogue.

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