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Sunday serialisation – The Orphans, 7.2 — 4 Comments

  1. Hmmmm. Some mystery unfolding. The phone outage and the computer failure have me worried. A little too much technical SNAFUs for my taste. Enjoyed it.

    • Thanks, John. Is your comment ree excessive SNAFUs empathising with Max or critiquing the content? I’m happy either way, but I am up for constructive criticism if it’s warranted.

      • Yeah, I should have been clearer. I meant the technical stuff seems suspicious. So the empathy with Max is what i wanted to convey. Hard to criticize good work.

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